Unhinged

I've thought of writing Micro Fictions for next 3 days. Today I have written a Five Sentence Fiction. I am not a pro in writing prose, especially micro fictions, but I have tried my level best.



It was the best day in Javed’s life because finally he and Aisha, his newlywed, were together away from the crowd. As it was their first night in Pattaya, their honeymoon destination he asked Aisha to wear a beautiful red nightgown that he himself had chosen for her. When Aisha came close to Javed wearing that dress she looked like an angel just dropped from the heaven. The moment Javed grabbed her face on his hard palms and pulled her nearer, with a sudden creaking the mirror in the room shattered and an abrupt flash reflected the image of a beautiful lady, of the girl he cheated on few days before his wedding took place. Her feral gape kept penetrating him the whole night.




This is Day 21 for the April A-Z Blogging Challenge, 2104. Today's theme- Alphabet U

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  1. Thought provoking and power short story narrated, Sayantini. It touched the heart and shows there is something call soul pricking the body.

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  2. Stopping by from the A-Z Challenge. Hope you're enjoying it as much as we are! Five-sentence-story idea is neat. Have you tried the six-word-story challenge? That's a hoot! I wrote about it on our blog recently. Caryn @writeonsisters.com

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  3. Your past never leaves you

    Blogging for A to Z challenge at The Other Side

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