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Brisk walk on stone-path,
Strolling heedless, curling locks,

Long wait till you come.

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  1. loved ur Haiku! Time is actually inversely proportional to eager, the more eagerly u wait the longer u feel....

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    1. Well said! And, thank you so much for commenting. Keep reading..

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  2. Oh my, do I love this. Every word, the space between the last two lines, the picture. Perfect.

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  3. the waiting !!
    Well written Haiku :)

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  4. nice...the anticipation can be felt...hope he doesn't let you wait too long..smiles

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  5. nice...you really set the visuals well in the first 2 lines....waiting for them to come home, not so fun...smiles.

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  6. Beautifully blended eagerness and patience :)

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