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loved ur Haiku! Time is actually inversely proportional to eager, the more eagerly u wait the longer u feel....
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Oh my, do I love this. Every word, the space between the last two lines, the picture. Perfect.
An enchanting wait :-)
the waiting !! Well written Haiku :)
Short and Nice.. :-)
wow very deep and rhymic :-)
nice...the anticipation can be felt...hope he doesn't let you wait too long..smiles
nice...you really set the visuals well in the first 2 lines....waiting for them to come home, not so fun...smiles.
Beautifully blended eagerness and patience :)
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loved ur Haiku! Time is actually inversely proportional to eager, the more eagerly u wait the longer u feel....
ReplyDeleteWell said! And, thank you so much for commenting. Keep reading..
DeleteOh my, do I love this. Every word, the space between the last two lines, the picture. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteAn enchanting wait :-)
ReplyDeletethe waiting !!
ReplyDeleteWell written Haiku :)
Short and Nice.. :-)
ReplyDeletewow very deep and rhymic :-)
ReplyDeletenice...the anticipation can be felt...hope he doesn't let you wait too long..smiles
ReplyDeletenice...you really set the visuals well in the first 2 lines....waiting for them to come home, not so fun...smiles.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully blended eagerness and patience :)
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