Her Human Friend...
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‘Nina, why are you
sad baby? It’s your birthday!’
‘Mamma, Ria can’t come and join the party.
‘Why?’
‘She is afraid of us.’
‘Why baby?’
‘Promise you won’t tell Papa about this.’
‘I promise.’
‘Mamma, Ria is my best friend. But she is a human.’
‘That’s not funny Nina! There’s no such thing as humans.’
Wow ! This was hilarious. I heard a joke on similar lines when I was a kid. But your story was soo cute :) :) Amazingly done :)
ReplyDeleteThank Tanya. And yeah! I've also heard that joke, this story hit my mind because of it!! :D
DeleteWow! great Sayantini, I am impressed!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Meenakshi!
DeleteI like the way you told it, and it's a different Idea too... All the best.. TC...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sasi!
DeleteHa ha ha ... I loved this ... what a twist at the end ... mind blowing ... it's one of the best micro stories I have ever read !!!
ReplyDeletehehehe..that was witty.. Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteHi Sayantini,
ReplyDeleteNow, that was spooky, from the point of view of ghosts :) :) :)
Brilliantly thought out and executed. This was a nice and short read.
Keep it up :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Thank you Jay. Keep in touch!
DeleteI read it twice...and suddenly I remembered the movie named "the others"... btw nice..
ReplyDeleteThanks!! But I've never heard of this movie :P
DeleteHa ha ...It is such a sweet post. makes me adore ghosts
ReplyDeleteHa ha...thanks Neeta. You just reminded me of Casper, the baby ghost!! So adorable!
DeleteSometimes the last line is so true :P Good take on the prompt. The ghost need to know that humans have a world of their own too :P Well written! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
DeleteLOL... Good to begin my Monday with a dose of humour
ReplyDeleteHa ha! Thanks Vijay :)
DeleteDamn cute.... loved reading it..for a change ghosts did not scare me here ;)
ReplyDeleteHa ha..right. Thanks Me :)
DeleteToo cute ...........like the movie Hotel transylvania
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
DeleteHahhahahaha...Reminds me of the joke..well written
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
DeleteAh, this is quite funny, it put a nice smile on my face this afternoon. Nice post.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteOh lolz! Nice contribution, zombies with humor!
ReplyDeleteWish you all the best with the contest...
Btw, first time here. You have a nice blog, following it :)
Thanks for the nice comment and for following me!
Delete*ghosts with humor! (A very bad typo, plz fix that in my previous comment)
ReplyDeletei usually, don't understand 55 word fictions but this one is cool!! are you going to write some more of these? will come back later and go through your blog archive.
ReplyDeleteYeah! why not. This post was just for a contest. But, given a chance, I'd definitely write these kind of stories. I love them too!!
Deletehahaha...good one!
ReplyDeleteWow! This was very creative:) Best wishes for the contest, Sayantini:)
ReplyDeleteSo ghosts don't believe in humans either?! :)
ReplyDeleteThis was very good! I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteA world where there are no humans!