An Opus of Anguish
A photo prompt by The Mag |
And in this desolated
corner,
I am left alone with
tarnished memories,
Waiting for your
footprints on the dust.
A drop of hope
underneath my eyes,
Watery edges of each
of them,
Recalling memories,
that gone too far,
Beyond my sight.
The dusty memories,
silently murmurs,
Into my ears,
startles me;
“It’s him”, I pretend
to say.
Illusions hush me up.
Faded, dimmed
whispers gush into my mind,
A symphony of sorrow,
An opus of anguish.
This poem is shared with The Mag for the above mentioned photo-prompt & with Theme Thursday for the prompt Whispers.
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