Pursuit of Thoughts

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My wishful thinking got life,
Wished with open eyes,
Dreamt with soul, my wishful thoughts.
My forbidden vision can’t speak
Nor can my lovely mute lips,
Yet I am free, in my dreams.
My wishful thinking resides
In my conscious dreams,
In my vague, dispersed shadow.
I cover my face with limbs,
I refuse to perceive, I cry,
I do not scream.
Fatal dream, immortal thoughts
Rise up and screech,
My wishful thinking is alive!

This poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday. Today's prompt Wishful thinkingthe title of a song from 1983 by the English New Wave band China Crisis.
This is also shared with Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally for Week 74


Comments

  1. Wow ... each of your poems strike a chord ... you are a gifted writer !!!

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    1. Thank you so much. Keep inspiring me like this:D

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  2. Nice. We are free in our dreams.

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  3. yes, keep your wishful thinking alive, smiles.

    dynamic word flow.

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  4. Good Luck in pursuing your dreams with eyes open or closed.

    love the imagery.

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  5. being in control is good.

    well done draft.

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  6. Wishes and dreams are important in life. Keep them burning strong! Positive craft!

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  7. Your words painted a splendid picture. Nice one.

    And hey, you might want to correct your title. "Thoughts"

    Cheers!

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  9. Awesome poem ... so different as the haiku I have read from your hand. Wishful thinking don't we all do that? It gives you a feeling of freedom ... and sometimes anxiousness.

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  10. You've really crafted your image in this one. Wonderfully written!

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  11. You've really crafted your image well! Wonderfully written =]

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  12. The only place where you can be absolutely free, your dreams :) Nice.

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  13. the best fantasy is in one's dream.

    powerful piece.

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  14. deep thinking,

    vivid or dreamy imagery.

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  15. Thank you everybody for loving this poem. Your comments are always appreciated:D

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  16. your words keep us afloat about our dreams and how these dreams relate to our life.

    way to go.

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