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Motion of her eyes
Revolts against the subtle breeze,
Beside the billowy river,
Hunts for her image in the water,
Relentless.
Her peaceful blinks each time,
Drop a lustrous pearl into the water.
Her vision of purity rinses out,
With surging emotions. 

I am posting a poem after a long long gap. Sorry for the discontinuity. This poem is shared with 3WW  and the three words for this Wednesday are Motion, Peaceful and Vision.
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  1. Vinay Leo R.24 November 2012 at 00:37

    Maybe she is looking for her image in the wrong place? Or not happy with the reflection she sees?

    The thought is quite beautifully carried throiugh in the poem. I liked it :)

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    1. Sayantini25 November 2012 at 11:21

      She's looking for her perfect image but ends up disappointed because of two things, first of all the undulation of the river and secondly because she thinks she's not pure or her reflection is not like what she really is......
      Thank you so much for commenting, Leo :)

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  2. Woman'n'Beyond24 November 2012 at 08:24

    Nice composition!I liked the play of imagery in lines

    "Her peaceful blinks each time,
    Drop a lustrous pearl into the water."

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  3. Ruhie24 November 2012 at 12:10

    Nice composition dear :)
    Ruhie
    The Sweet Life

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  4. Amrit Sinha24 November 2012 at 15:38

    This was full of a divine calmness ... the words flowed on smoothly, bringing with it emotions of joy and serenity ... I loved the way you drew the image with these lines ... beautifully done !!!

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  5. Privy Trifles24 November 2012 at 19:16

    So much has been expressed in this short and beautiful poem!

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    1. Sayantini25 November 2012 at 11:26

      Thanks Me, thank you for commenting on my blog :)

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  6. Anunoy Samanta24 November 2012 at 19:24

    Sayantini, I could collage a beautiful, wet and serene image from your lines... loved it indeed :-)

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
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    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

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    1. Sayantini25 November 2012 at 11:27

      Thanks Anunoy, I'll definitely go through both of your blogs.

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  7. Hiten24 November 2012 at 21:11

    Hi Sayantini,

    It's great to be at your blog.

    Lovely poem! I really enjoyed it. It was very thought provoking.

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  8. sumukh bansal25 November 2012 at 01:41

    lovely..:)

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  9. Panchali25 November 2012 at 10:19

    Oh, Good writing is all about good word choice and proper ordering. And you've proved it here, Sayantini.
    Beautiful piece:)

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  10. Anonymous25 November 2012 at 10:31

    I found your poem to be peaceful and inspiring.

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  11. rupam sarma25 November 2012 at 12:28

    Beautiful poem.

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  12. Laura25 November 2012 at 18:36

    abSOULutely beautiful...

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  13. Mary25 November 2012 at 19:40

    I love the intensity of feelings in this poem! Nice.

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  14. Anonymous25 November 2012 at 20:41

    love the way you start with motion and end with emotion - neat circularity for a beautiful poem.

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  15. Sheilagh Lee26 November 2012 at 01:26

    very beautifully put.

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  16. Serena26 November 2012 at 04:49

    This is very beautiful...

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  17. Unknown26 November 2012 at 05:10

    Tears have rarely been described so beautifully.

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  18. Francesca Giusti26 November 2012 at 12:38

    love your blog and also your blog! It's so nice!!! I follow you!
    Pass to my blog and if it likes you follow me too, I will be so glad :D
    kisses
    http://francescagiusti.blogspot.com/

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    1. Sayantini26 November 2012 at 17:28

      Aww..thank you so much Francesca. I'll definitely go through your blog. Thank you for being here :)

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  19. Preeti S.26 November 2012 at 13:41

    So vivid. Beautifully penned. Keep it up. :)

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  20. Unknown26 November 2012 at 18:21

    Beautiful ~

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  21. Sherry Blue Sky27 November 2012 at 00:28

    Beautiful, kiddo, and it's nice to see you posting!!

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    1. Sayantini27 November 2012 at 12:57

      Thank you so much Sherry, it's an honor posting for you :)

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  22. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger27 November 2012 at 02:28

    Subtle and vivid--what a beautiful combination!

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    1. Sayantini27 November 2012 at 12:58

      Thanks Audrey. Thanks for being here. Keep in touch :)

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  23. Grace27 November 2012 at 05:04

    Lovely weaving of words ~

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  24. Shawna27 November 2012 at 05:25

    I love this. Gorgeous imagery, dripping with emotion, pain, fear of self and change. Fantastic.

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  25. Anonymous28 November 2012 at 09:58

    very thoughtful imagery!

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  26. phatichar28 November 2012 at 12:16

    Beautiful.. :)

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  27. Margaret29 November 2012 at 09:41

    purity... We aren't always the best at judging ourselves...

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  28. Jade30 November 2012 at 01:39

    lovely!x

    theistyleblog.blogspot.com

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  29. Danny Simon1 December 2012 at 08:27

    Seems more like a personal touch... I guess everyone is searching to see their reflection in every person they meet... Well written!

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  30. Fashion activef10 December 2012 at 17:40

    reading your poems gets me through my day at office . Following you via bloglovin and friend connect .Check out my blog

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    1. Sayantini10 December 2012 at 17:57

      Aww..thank you so much!! Will check your blog in no time :)

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