Endless Seasons
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A garish,
dreadful breath of nature,
The ghastly
warmth of sigh,
Breaking
the weir of patience,
Summer
is on the high.
A
green, sodden stroke of luck,
Freshened
air and souls,
Here
comes the monsoon,
With rock
n’ rolls.
Blithe, sun-drenched sky,
Smells
of imminent joy,
Clear trail
of celebrations,
Autumn
is here with new ploy.
Then comes
the chilly troll,
With all
his pangs summoned up,
Cold,
sore anguished life,
Winter
has taken up.
Blooming,
blissful springtime comes,
Brash,
loud and, intrepid,
Vivid and
innocent sort of zest,
Validates
the ecstatic need.
This
is how the sequence goes,
Beginnings
and ends time and again
With incessant
joys, ceaseless beams,
But I
believe in endless seasons of dreams.
This poem is linked to Poetry Jam and the prompt is Seasons.
Your words flow like a whiff of freshness like the changing seasons ... you are an awesome poet !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amrit!!
Deleteexhilarating...
ReplyDeleteThanks Rakesh!
Deletewinter the troll, ha....i think that it has its merits as well...if any season were endless i would hope it be of dreams
ReplyDeleteSame wish here Brian. Thanks for commenting. I personally don't like Winter that much, it makes me lazier!! Ha ha :)
DeleteThe endless season of dreams sounds beautiful to me really. "Monsoon, with rocks and rolls" - not so much. I like the rhyming in this poem, and the words just rolled on my tongue.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Mary :)
DeleteVery nice!! And that ending is wonderful :-)
ReplyDeleteHey! thanks Sara :)
DeleteOh yes, endless seasons of dreams for sure! And I like the idea you have here of the cycle of seasons being endless. Thanks for responding to my prompt at Poetry Jam!!
ReplyDeleteOh! thanks Peggy for giving this wonderful opportunity to write something about this miracle of nature...change of seasons and more :)
DeleteBeautiful poem of cycles and seasons. I especially love "But I believe in endless seasons of dreams." Me too, kiddo.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much :)
Delete.. like Vivaldi's Four Seasons!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the complement, but I don't know if I deserve that at all or not!
DeleteAnother piece of spontaneity and brilliance after 'Letter of Hope'. happy I discovered your blog. particularly loved the last line...
ReplyDeleteAww! you made my day Meenakshi :)
DeleteWonderfully crafted......
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Thanks Debopam :)
DeleteThank you so much Loredana!
ReplyDeleteLove the ending! It's great to believe in endless dreams!
ReplyDeleteThanks Robyn. Please keep reading :)
Deletethats a perfect weaving of words dear.... excellent!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Madhavi, thanks for the lovely comment. Keep in touch :)
DeleteLoved the seasons whirling in a cycle. Beautiful composition, Sayantani!Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Ma'am :)
DeleteSerene Poetry! A poem on all seasons for all seasons. Your mesmerizing words were soothing and refreshing.
ReplyDeleteAm glad to have found your blog. :)
Thanks Raj, I am honored :)
DeleteBeautifully written!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Me, thanks for stopping by :)
Deletei ADORE your ending!!! divine take on the prompt!
ReplyDeletethank you so much for participating at Poetry Jam!
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Thank you so much Dani!
DeleteAwesome poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay..
DeleteThis is gorgeous writing, very musically written. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :)
DeleteThen comes the chilly troll,
ReplyDeleteSo loved that image... and of course, an endless season of dreams. Nice.
Thank you Margaret :)
DeleteI like the last line especially.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for commenting :)
DeleteVery nicely written poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for stopping by :)
DeleteI love the last line... it changes the whole piece and brings peace with it. I hope you will join me and others around the world in creating a gratitude quilt of words. To learn more about this project and how you can participate read the white box at the top of my blog. It would be wonderful to have you be a part of this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura, I'd definitely join you in this wonderful process of thanks-giving. Thank you for knocking me :)
DeleteSeasons make for wonderful musing...really like how you wrapped it all up. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteExcellent word choice. I enjoyed the unexpected (but nicely done) descriptions.
ReplyDeletevisiting for the first time, and I must say commendable.
ReplyDeletewhere is my comment?? :O Its gone :(
ReplyDeleteNevermind, I loved your poem...very very much...its amazingly rhythmic and smooth flowing...
A very happy Diwali to you girl :)
amazing poem! :)
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