Letter of Hope
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As far as my eyes can see,
I see you, I contemplate.
I think of you, night and day,
I dream of you day-long!
I write to you, countless letters,
Full of my heart; feelings die,
Inside it, crumpled piece of love.
I write thousand times, with new
hope, new light!
But every time they cry, they cry
alone,
In the dark.
The black words become alive,
They crawl, they creep all over,
All over my bed, my body.
They stretch out scrawny hands,
To smother me, or my dreams!
I wake up, not a soul there,
I am old and wise enough,
I write another note, fast and
clear.
And fold and keep with care.
And promised to not crumple anymore.
And, again go to bed, to sleep, to
dream.
‘Cause, as far as my eyes can see,
I see me with you,
Entangled in your arms, merged into your
eyes.
This poem is linked to Carry On Tuesday and the prompt for this week is the title and the first-line of a famous song from 1982, sung by Colin Blunstone with the Alan Parsons Project.
Title: Old and wise
First line: As far as my eyes can see
There is sadness and pain in this poem, but yet there is hope in dreams. Sometimes one must be thankful for the dreams!
ReplyDeleteYes, the only benefit of dreaming is that it gives you the strength to fulfill it. Thanks for commenting Mary. Please keep reading :)
DeleteGood one...
ReplyDeleteThanks Angel :)
Delete"‘Cause, as far as my eyes can see,I see me with you,Entangled in your arms, merged into your eyes." - Every time I come across your blog, I experience the power of your thoughts and the magic of your words ... u r an awesome writer !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Your comments have always been an encouragement for me. From the very first day, you have been very supportive. I heartily thank you for that.
DeleteI hope this person has her dreams come true. It is sad, and yet, there is hope too. The imagery of crying in the dark is just... so sad.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
May her sadness turns into rich happiness! Thanks for commenting. Keep reading :)
DeleteI agree--lots of sadness, but beautifully done--
ReplyDeleteThanks Audrey. Thanks for stopping by my blog :)
DeleteSadly beautiful poem..
ReplyDeleteThank you Sri :)
DeleteHi Sayantini, new to your blog, what ever happens in life, optimism must get its due!
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DeleteLovely and haunting...this thought is going to remain with me for a long time!!
ReplyDeleteLoved reading it
Thanks Me for the lovely comment. I am glad to know that you are going to remember these lines, and also thanks for following my blog. Lots of love straight from my heart!!
Deletegreat take on the prompt!!!
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Thanks a lot. Thanks for stopping by my blog :)
DeleteThe title is so perfect for your poem! I read sadness but also hope for someday...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Robyn :)
DeleteI have no words to describe this poem!
ReplyDeletesimply awesome!
Nice and Impressive design of your blog!
Thank you so very much :)
DeleteI like the hope and dream of reunion at the end ~ Lovely piece ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :)
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