There is a Place...
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There is a place,
Where I can go,
Without the burden,
Of my broken dreams,
Withered life.
There is a place,
Where I can be,
In sickness in health,
Alone or together,
Be myself.
There is a place,
Where I can breathe,
Without smelling
My burnt heart,
Reeking love.
There is a place,
Where I can live,
With me, and only me,
Like an isolated soul,
Desolate star.
And the moment is the time spent in solitude or with one's soul mate...!!!
ReplyDeleteNice one! :)
ReplyDeleteWow ... I would love to be in such a place :-) Your words flowed like a dream ... how do you create such magic every time? :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Sayantini,
ReplyDeleteLovely poem.
So, where is this place, which you speak of in the poem, in your case?
Regards
Jay
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Nice One!:)
ReplyDeleteWho will not want such a place...
ReplyDeleteThat's a great place. So important to shed the masks and just be ourselves. I like how expressed this.
ReplyDeleteso great to have somewhere to go and be yourself!
ReplyDeletesolitude is fine, but loneliness is deadly....
ReplyDeletenice read :)
ReplyDeleteI would love to spend some time there! lovely poem!!
ReplyDelete"My burnt heart, reeking love." Ah! Beautiful :)
ReplyDeletewithered love, reeking love, isolated soul.. just awesome... i wish such hypothetical place does exist.. world is in dire need of such place..
ReplyDeleteLovely thoughts and well expressed!
ReplyDeleteWe all need a special place.
ReplyDeleteB.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L
ReplyDeletethis is real for me.......and I am always living........
ReplyDeleteI ♥ that place too!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem :)
So deep and beautiful. U sure write !
ReplyDeleteLoved this
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