Search

Source


Motion of her eyes
Revolts against the subtle breeze,
Beside the billowy river,
Hunts for her image in the water,
Relentless.
Her peaceful blinks each time,
Drop a lustrous pearl into the water.
Her vision of purity rinses out,
With surging emotions. 

I am posting a poem after a long long gap. Sorry for the discontinuity. This poem is shared with 3WW  and the three words for this Wednesday are Motion, Peaceful and Vision.

Comments

  1. Maybe she is looking for her image in the wrong place? Or not happy with the reflection she sees?

    The thought is quite beautifully carried throiugh in the poem. I liked it :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. She's looking for her perfect image but ends up disappointed because of two things, first of all the undulation of the river and secondly because she thinks she's not pure or her reflection is not like what she really is......
      Thank you so much for commenting, Leo :)

      Delete
  2. Nice composition!I liked the play of imagery in lines

    "Her peaceful blinks each time,
    Drop a lustrous pearl into the water."

    ReplyDelete
  3. This was full of a divine calmness ... the words flowed on smoothly, bringing with it emotions of joy and serenity ... I loved the way you drew the image with these lines ... beautifully done !!!

    ReplyDelete
  4. So much has been expressed in this short and beautiful poem!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Me, thank you for commenting on my blog :)

      Delete
  5. Sayantini, I could collage a beautiful, wet and serene image from your lines... loved it indeed :-)

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
    -------------------------------
    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Anunoy, I'll definitely go through both of your blogs.

      Delete
  6. Hi Sayantini,

    It's great to be at your blog.

    Lovely poem! I really enjoyed it. It was very thought provoking.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Oh, Good writing is all about good word choice and proper ordering. And you've proved it here, Sayantini.
    Beautiful piece:)

    ReplyDelete
  8. I found your poem to be peaceful and inspiring.

    ReplyDelete
  9. I love the intensity of feelings in this poem! Nice.

    ReplyDelete
  10. love the way you start with motion and end with emotion - neat circularity for a beautiful poem.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Tears have rarely been described so beautifully.

    ReplyDelete
  12. love your blog and also your blog! It's so nice!!! I follow you!
    Pass to my blog and if it likes you follow me too, I will be so glad :D
    kisses
    http://francescagiusti.blogspot.com/

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Aww..thank you so much Francesca. I'll definitely go through your blog. Thank you for being here :)

      Delete
  13. So vivid. Beautifully penned. Keep it up. :)

    ReplyDelete
  14. Beautiful, kiddo, and it's nice to see you posting!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you so much Sherry, it's an honor posting for you :)

      Delete
  15. Subtle and vivid--what a beautiful combination!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Audrey. Thanks for being here. Keep in touch :)

      Delete
  16. I love this. Gorgeous imagery, dripping with emotion, pain, fear of self and change. Fantastic.

    ReplyDelete
  17. purity... We aren't always the best at judging ourselves...

    ReplyDelete
  18. lovely!x

    theistyleblog.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete
  19. Seems more like a personal touch... I guess everyone is searching to see their reflection in every person they meet... Well written!

    ReplyDelete
  20. reading your poems gets me through my day at office . Following you via bloglovin and friend connect .Check out my blog

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Aww..thank you so much!! Will check your blog in no time :)

      Delete

Post a Comment

Read it? Now drop a comment to make my day!

Popular Posts