Pursuit of Thoughts
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My wishful thinking got life,
Wished with open eyes,
Dreamt with soul, my wishful thoughts.
My forbidden vision can’t speak
Nor can my lovely mute lips,
Yet I am free, in my dreams.
My wishful thinking resides
In my conscious dreams,
In my vague, dispersed shadow.
I cover my face with limbs,
I refuse to perceive, I cry,
I do not scream.
Fatal dream, immortal thoughts
Rise up and screech,
My wishful thinking is alive!
This poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday. Today's prompt Wishful thinking, the title of a song from 1983 by the English New Wave band China Crisis.
This is also shared with Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally for Week 74
This is also shared with Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally for Week 74
Wow ... each of your poems strike a chord ... you are a gifted writer !!!
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DeleteNice. We are free in our dreams.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala. Keep reading:D
DeleteLoved it! Keep writing...!!
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yes, keep your wishful thinking alive, smiles.
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Good Luck in pursuing your dreams with eyes open or closed.
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being in control is good.
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Wishes and dreams are important in life. Keep them burning strong! Positive craft!
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Awesome poem ... so different as the haiku I have read from your hand. Wishful thinking don't we all do that? It gives you a feeling of freedom ... and sometimes anxiousness.
ReplyDeletefantastic and dreamy imagery.
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ReplyDeleteYou've really crafted your image well! Wonderfully written =]
ReplyDeleteThe only place where you can be absolutely free, your dreams :) Nice.
ReplyDeletethe best fantasy is in one's dream.
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deep thinking,
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Thank you everybody for loving this poem. Your comments are always appreciated:D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful work :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Palak:)
Deleteyour words keep us afloat about our dreams and how these dreams relate to our life.
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