Search For Togetherness
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Sometimes when I am alone, I cry,
For togetherness.
For immortal love.
My blind-folded soul,
Keeps counting every flash,
Detangles the moments
Spent with you, randomly.
I smile, I cry,
I wipe the tears from my rosy cheeks.
I wish, I try,
To get back our lost togetherness.
I find the moments gone,
Out of the trash of ashes,
Tear-drops and sighs.
This poem is linked to-
* Carry On Tuesday #194 (Prompt- The first two lines of a poem by Tupac Amaru Shakur, known also by his stage name 2pac.)
You have certainly tapped into some deep feelings of abandonment in the writing of this poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeletevery heart felt, nicely penned.
ReplyDeleteYou depicted the pain and loneliness with sheer poignancy ... the words are delicately used and add a touch of realism in this poetry !!!
ReplyDeleteI find the first two lines to be quite a heart tug!
ReplyDeleteoh do beautiful...
ReplyDeleteYou have touched on a feeling so many can understand. Sad when 'togetherness' ends...nicely described.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful. Thanks for contributing to this weeks Carry On Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteWow! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteTeardrops and sighs; the tokens of longing.
ReplyDeleteI love you writing style. Beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteLove your last line... teardrops and sighs. This is bittersweet, melancholic and reminiscent of that universal first lost love.
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love love & love endless or start of end.. cute smile with deep pain...
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